- by Starwarrior2000 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 06/10/2010 |
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- Title: my verry first Avi Art.
- Artist: Starwarrior2000
- Description: A friend of mine had an ineresting Avatar and I was attempting to draw it. Please give all critisim good and bad that you have to give. It is appreicated grately.
- Date: 06/10/2010
- Tags: verry first
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Comments (6 Comments)
- evildarkangel365 - 06/14/2010
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you should probably make the body slimmer...
and the arms bigger (as in thicker)
and you dont wanna forget the eyebrows! (unless the avatar didn't have eyebrows or something)
but its a really good picture and i like it :] - Report As Spam
- Chillerr Snowcone - 06/12/2010
- its really good but i think u should make the chin pointier
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- SweetCrimsonLullaby - 06/10/2010
- With the way his feet are pointing it looks like he has a weird, spread-legged stance going on, which is a bit awkward and unnatural looking. His arms are, as stated, a bit thin, but more then that (I feel anyways) they seem out of proportion, because his torso, legs, and head, all match proportions really, really well (very nice on that, by the way). Overall, I do like it though.
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- Yuki_Kitsune02 - 06/10/2010
- i like it ^_^. but all ready now that. and yea a little bit more muscle would help him O_O >.< lol. But still good knowing you don't draw much. ^_^
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- Starwarrior2000 - 06/10/2010
- Ok thank you, I will work on that the next time.
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- Ultra Kitty Girl - 06/10/2010
- The arms are really thin...I think you could maybe make them a bit bigger and his legs don't look like they're in a right position... maybe tweak them a bit
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