- by Lilium_nocturne |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 06/06/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: Taka and Sky
- Artist: Lilium_nocturne
- Description: My Yakuza character and the girl that hangs with him. A few things are a little wonky, like Sky's lower body and her gum, but overall I like it.
- Date: 06/06/2009
- Tags: taka yakuza japan tokyomisfits
- Report Post
Comments (4 Comments)
- Lilium_nocturne - 06/06/2009
- Thanks for the awsome critiques so far!! Seriously!
- Report As Spam
- Orihime Evie - 06/06/2009
- Just work on those proportions....I think for the way you drew the girl...her head should be a little bit bigger...just based off the body. I honestly think her breast placement is fine....with big'uns like those..it's only normal for them to hang a little low...trust me on that. Her arms do make her out to be somewhat beefy...if that's the look she's sporting then alrighty. ^_^
- Report As Spam
- Vibrating Panties - 06/06/2009
- The females shoulders are a little broad, giving her a more masculine look, and her breasts are a little too low on her torso. =3 her waist and hips should also be up a little higher. Something is a bit werid with one of the guy's legs and it makes his stance look a bit awkward. I love the style you draw for faces though, and your coloring is pretty good. This isn't too bad at all. You have a lot of potential! =3 4/5
- Report As Spam
- sepiroth93 - 06/06/2009
- hmmm not bad 5/5
- Report As Spam
