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- | Submitted on 05/04/2009 |
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- Title: Saya (rough draft)
- Artist: ninjaclimbs
- Description: This is only a rought draft of a character named saya. I need some advice on this. Yes, I will add in shadings. Yes, I will add in wrinkles and stuff on her pants and coat a little more. But, I feel like I'm missing something, I just don't know what. And when I say give me advice, it's not "THIS SUXS A KID CAN DO BETTER" or that crap, because I'll just delete your comment anyway, so don't waste your time if you have no constructive critcisim.
- Date: 05/04/2009
- Tags: saya rough draft
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Comments (2 Comments)
- sunshine316 - 05/04/2009
- i like where your going with this.my opinion is-make her legs more shapely(not so baggie pants).and her eye balls are very nice but the rest of the eye looks i think to wide/long,needs a rounder socket,not to much just a little.i hope i helped,i love saya,i named my kitty after her...lol..
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- Yoru Inugami - 05/04/2009
- i think it needs some sort of background. and like some type of aura coming of the person a little bit.
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