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  • EGL Halloween Neko?
  • Title: EGL Halloween Neko?
  • Artist: Static Fuse
  • Description: Happy Halloween c: Coloured pencil. This is for a contest on Bebo that I felt like entering, it's a rather random OC of mine -completely Tango'ed on purpose, btw.- dressing up as a Lolita Neko for Halloween. Constructive crit please! Oh and my dA is pearlcake.deviantart.com </shamelessselfpromotion>
  • Date: 10/22/2008
  • Tags: halloween neko lolita
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • Static Fuse - 10/22/2008
  • @punkanimefreec All those things you mentioned are my style: The knees, the too-large head, the spindly legs and the less-detailed candy. Kinda SD/Chibi? But I do take your point about the hands, just bad drawing on my part n___n'
  • animefreec - 10/22/2008
  • her legs look rather short, and her hands are too small. the tail looks a bit weird.. i thing you could have made the part directly under the skirt thicker. more detail should be put into the candy inside the basket. head and hair and face look really good. knees look... almost immature....idk it doesn't look right. costume looks good. overall good job and i hope that you will improve even more^^
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