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- | Submitted on 04/20/2010 |
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- Title: HandsofFate pg:12
- Artist: DreamLandMassacre
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- Date: 04/20/2010
- Tags: handsoffate pg12
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Comments (4 Comments)
- slip-3bo0odz - 06/14/2010
- so cool
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- Mezri - 05/19/2010
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Looks good, you might need to work on some of the grammar and spelling. IE: in the second pannel it should be we're not were. And, the second last pannel it says "homr" instead of "home"
Your art is pretty good but your paint skills need a little work. You could straighten up the lines and, make the text boxes thinner I think it would make the finished product look heaps better. Very nice though. C: 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Christica - 05/17/2010
- The art looks good, save for the second panel. Her head should be a little wider. Just a little ^-^;; I bet, if you had brought the hair on the top-back of her head out just a lil farther it would look good :'3;;
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- Frost Elemental - 04/20/2010
- Wow, it's awesome, please keep making them, I wanna see the end
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