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- | Submitted on 10/22/2008 |
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- Title: 24yrs - GoGoGo ep.1-04
- Artist: HMS Swiftsure
- Description: how was it ...?
- Date: 10/22/2008
- Tags: 24yrs gogogo ep104
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Piexi - 07/22/2011
- The quality of line line work and such may not be the best, but you aren't a terrible artist by any means. I think if you were to use a different program, it'd turn out a lot better. It's still really cute though. (:
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- Pxlated - 06/16/2009
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:3 cleaner lines. You'd do better inking it traditionally instead of inking it digitally. The white in the line work is always a no no.
In terms of the dialogue, I can't say I'm a fan of the speech. It sounds bizzare - not that Japanese is completely foreign to me or anything; its your use.
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- ilovejapanXD - 06/08/2009
- kinda corny make it more interesting smile )
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- Rpsskater - 03/08/2009
- it sucks booooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Tiki_Takii - 01/20/2009
- O_o random bump...Sorry. 0_o
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- fujiro_usagi_ji - 01/10/2009
- Makes me think of Midori...
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- beholdmyrandomness - 01/02/2009
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thats awesome
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