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  • Title: memories......
  • Artist: CuteChibiYoko
  • Description: that girl in the middle is the main character and the side drawings are her memories over the past few days/weeks/months/year i dont know what time to pick.
    yea i just got this preference image and seems like its got A PIONTY chin! and its an anime drawn by a pro anime artist!!! if you wanna see the pic it bigger go to photobucket and type in revolutionary girl!
    and im not a pro so i also makes mistakes just like everyone else and i know the eye lashes are really disgustingly weird....
  • Date: 04/04/2009
  • Tags: memories
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • StarberrySquid - 07/15/2009
  • And more because I was cut off - aww... >:

    The breasts also look a little squished and awkward, like they're being moved, pulled apart, smooshed together, and defying gravity. D: But, I really can't offer real help to fix this since... I'd say, "Go study how they look" and the tutorials/models/blahblahblah can be real.... uh... silly. ^^;

    But this is good anyways! Really! I wish you luck with your future drawings! ^^
  • StarberrySquid - 07/15/2009
  • I... haven't looked through the comments to see if this has been said before, but real advice I shall give! ^^

    Okay, first, the eyes are a bit too big, even if it is for anime. And, the shape of them is just a bit odd in general, try rounding them out a little. You also smoosh the face details a bit too much, like... it'd be good, if the eyes/mouth/nose didn't take one third of the head, and the other two thirds are forehead. Just, ya know, space it out a little. ^^
  • Captain of the Dead - 06/10/2009
  • And how the heck is Utena related to this?
    Pointy chins are not Utena-only...for god's sake.
    BUT, your drawing is still cute, even though all the anatomy mistakes and such.
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