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  • BeastWARs:lost memories
  • Title: BeastWARs:lost memories
  • Artist: SriB
  • Description: This is just a prevew of my manga
    ..what is happening here may not happen till
    later on in the story o3o
    If u want to see this go here x3

    http://www.mangabullet.com/comics/671


    Copy and past it at the top of ur computer :3
  • Date: 01/05/2009
  • Tags: beastwarslost memories
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • lmasdlkjasdoiajusdlknm - 01/06/2009
  • I like the way you draw. You got that in check. However, don't jumble up your frames like that. And the speech bubbles are allowed to transcend frames if you want them to. Also, remember to keep it at a limit of 6 frames.
  • devastatingtruth - 01/05/2009
  • From what I can see, you have a good grasp on how to draw anime figures. The one thing that I will suggest is with your word bubbles... try not to cut off words in such awkward ways. Like the word 'These': it is a one-syllable word; ergo you cannot hyphen it, same with the word 'pass'. So keep that in mind when you work on the comic. I hope to see more of you comic. Good luck.
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